These past few days has been a rainy one. And I loved it pretty much. Rain is amazing, of course, on the days when you aren't out. I love sitting inside the house watching the rain trickle down my window. It's really soothing.
Here's a short poem I made about rain when I was fifteen. Do leave me critics, yeah ?
Rain, rain ! Pour on fields
Father wants to sow the seeds.
Rain, rain ! Fill our tanks
The cattle will all be filled with thanks.
Rain, rain ! Pour in the street
My paper boats can make a fleet.
Pour in here ; pour in there
Bring in fresh green everywhere.
Note : I got no idea for an entry actually. Pfft.
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2 comments:
Not capable to critic english peom. but i think it just nice.
rain is nice unless it causes big flood.
Nicely done =)
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